Quote:
Originally Posted by him666
I'm really !#$% in guitar playing, so this was kinda my best effort 
Glad you enjoyed listening to it! |
I thought the guitar playing was tidy enough and the texture of all the sounds is good.
What I am saying is that.....
busy guitar + busy bass = potential for mush.
My suggestion is to work on the arrangement and have less busy bass to support the guitar when it's doing something interesting and maybe chords on the guitar when the bass is doing something interesting. The Jam were very good at this - maybe have a listen to "Funeral Pyre", "Tube Station" and "Strange Town".