| Well, I listened to it. Sounds like you guys are competant musicians and know what your doing. It sounded a little repetative but of course a vocal melody would probably make all the differance in the world. Other than a few little licks here and there I could'nt really hear the bass all that well so it's hard for me to really coment on it. I guess maybe you should try playing around with EQ'ing your bass a little differently to cut through the guitar. It sounded like you were just bumping along on the root most of the time and that's cool but I thought I heard some parts of the tune where you could stretch out and play something different than the guitar player (and maybe you are and I just can't hear it). All and all I think it sounded good and you should be proud. | 
Take a look please? 
