what can be done to fixe this song???

[BLonge]

my band: forgotten loss

i really need some input on this cause everyones going different ways on this song. first: heres a link to the song:

http://www.purevolume.com/forgottenloss

me nor the singer like this song at all. theres just something about it that we dont like. we tried to explain it the the guitarist and drumer,but they think its fine. i think we should just abandon the song all together but my our singer wants to try and fix it.

what do you guys think about it? what can be done to fix it or improve it,if anything at all? what can i PERSONALLY do as a bass player to improve the bass on it? the bass is kinda plain and i dont like it.

thanks guys

[briand]

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[BLonge]

aight this will work::::


http://www.purevolume.com/forgottenloss