what do you guys think?

[jamersonburton]

just a couple recordings i've done.
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[Moosehead1966]

Would like to hear it with strong 'accented' drums. Sharp and defined. Like..shall I say...RHCP style. Good line. Needs funked' up drum support and will breath..Congrats!!

Marc

[Adam Barkley]

I like "possible band song."

[jamersonburton]

thanks for the comments guys. the "possible band song" was written by the lead guitarist in my band. "punkrock inspired jam" was my first recording ever but not the last! i see what you mean and ill pump up the drums on my future recordings! thanks!

[parmezans]

I like your bass riff that you incorporated into the punk based recording, it sound very medieval, in a way. Very cool man. May I ask what scale it's over? The guitar was off in the recording but it would sound fine, needs a different sounding guitar IMO.
The band song ROCKS! I'm so inspired right now! Your bass tone is great on that one. That must become a full-on song, I'm impressed, pretty much, it's the direction I would want to move in if I had a band. It needs more accent on certain drum beats, as someone above me said. Other than that... great. Just great. Do you have 2 guitars?

[jamersonburton]

im not great with scales and theory but im pretty sure the bass and guitar revolve around B (2nd fret A string). I recorded two tracks with 1 guitar (PRS SE billy martin) and my bass was a squier matt freeman pbass
Anyways, I recorded both through a peavey electric guitar amp and let the mic on my mac pick up the sound. (bass amp getting repaired)

For the band song, that was a pbass and the gutiar players schecter and we just recorded different tracks.
PS Sorry about the guitar being off, won't happen again!

[gleventhal]

Originally Posted by Adam Barkley

I like "possible band song."

Agreed, the punk jam has some weird rhythm stuff happening in the first section between the bass and guitar, it gives me an uneasy feeling.

[ibateur]

Originally Posted by gleventhal

Agreed, the punk jam has some weird rhythm stuff happening in the first section between the bass and guitar, it gives me an uneasy feeling.

I was thinking about a reaction, and it was in fact "uneasy"

The bass riff is nice. I think it can use another note at the "and" of 4 (or 8).

I'm not too fond of your tone. Seems to be very middy.

The jam is jammy, your bass line isn't locked in with the beat, which can indeed have a more committed (louder) feel.