What do you guys think of our song?

mastathump · #1 09-12-2011, 08:29 AM

This is our first recording, and I don't really mind harsh comments since it'll be for the improvement of my band and myself!

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Well, if you guys for some reason like us, feel free to search for the band "Imelda" on Facebook.

GLEN18INCHSPICA · #2 09-12-2011, 08:42 AM

Pretty good. I would ditch the vocoder in the beginning, it's way overused in pop music already. I would'nt use the word selfish so much in the verses, I would save it for the chorus.

mastathump · #3 09-12-2011, 08:47 AM

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Originally Posted by GLEN18INCHSPICA

Pretty good. I would ditch the vocoder in the beginning, it's way overused in pop music already. I would'nt use the word selfish so much in the verses, I would save it for the chorus.

Thanks so much man!

We'll keep that in mind.

mastathump · #4 09-13-2011, 03:16 AM

skywalkersurfs · #5 09-13-2011, 04:03 PM

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Originally Posted by GLEN18INCHSPICA

Pretty good. I would ditch the vocoder in the beginning, it's way overused in pop music already. I would'nt use the word selfish so much in the verses, I would save it for the chorus.

Agree with the above comment. It's always tricky giving feedback without knowing people. You guys did an excellent job. Did you record this yourselves or in a studio? I also got an Alice In Chains vibe from it if that helps or means anything. It's definitely a strong sounding recording and the energy translates well.

IncX · #6 09-13-2011, 05:26 PM

ditto to the comment above about the alice in chains vibe, its pretty cool.

my comment is: the dynamics doesnt change very much from the verse to the chorus ... i dont know, guess i am just a big fan of those big chorus stuff, and all the envelope filter-wah stuff begins to sound droning near the end

Liam Wald · #7 09-13-2011, 05:40 PM

I also think that the vocal is too processed.
Cool tune though. Nicely done mate.