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Old 09-12-2011, 08:29 AM
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What do you guys think of our song?

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Old 09-12-2011, 08:42 AM
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Pretty good. I would ditch the vocoder in the beginning, it's way overused in pop music already. I would'nt use the word selfish so much in the verses, I would save it for the chorus.
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Pretty good. I would ditch the vocoder in the beginning, it's way overused in pop music already. I would'nt use the word selfish so much in the verses, I would save it for the chorus.
Thanks so much man! We'll keep that in mind.
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Pretty good. I would ditch the vocoder in the beginning, it's way overused in pop music already. I would'nt use the word selfish so much in the verses, I would save it for the chorus.
Agree with the above comment. It's always tricky giving feedback without knowing people. You guys did an excellent job. Did you record this yourselves or in a studio? I also got an Alice In Chains vibe from it if that helps or means anything. It's definitely a strong sounding recording and the energy translates well.
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Old 09-13-2011, 05:26 PM
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ditto to the comment above about the alice in chains vibe, its pretty cool.

my comment is: the dynamics doesnt change very much from the verse to the chorus ... i dont know, guess i am just a big fan of those big chorus stuff, and all the envelope filter-wah stuff begins to sound droning near the end
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I also think that the vocal is too processed.
Cool tune though. Nicely done mate.
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