What do you think of my band?

[Bob Clayton]

I've wondered for a while what people on here would think of my band, but I never got around to posting a thread like this.

Only focus on the music, as we just got rid of our singer.

www.myspace.com/oneliner

PS. They we are using an old version of "Chemical Burn". It's not me on bass, I came in and added a funky line to it, but haven't recorded it yet.

All comments/criticism welcome, whether it be positive or negative.

[Bob Clayton]

anyone?

[God of Rapture]

Checked it out. Not really my style so it is hard for me to make any comments.

God job on losing that vocalist.

[Bluez Dawg]

sounds all right.

[Triclops]

cool song! good vocals! no bass to speak of!

[crkempton]

sounds sorta like finch

[Bob Clayton]

Originally Posted by crkempton

sounds sorta like finch

is that a good thing or a bad thing?

[MarkMyWordsXx]

yea id agree that theres no bass to speak of.

and um..you have an..interesting set up there...a 4x10+horn under a 2x10 under a 1x15 combo? hold on let me go put every amp i own ontop of eachother

cool songs tho, but i think you should finalize your rig,. it seems you cant really decide?

[Bob Clayton]

yeah, i know what you mean about the setup. something was wrong with my hartke head so i had to use the only other thing i had, which was the combo.

i just bought a GK full stack, so i'm in busniess now.

[jrthebassguy]

You have a solid sound that I definitely like, but of what I heard, the songs seem to kind of...drag on. IMO i'd either add more parts to some sections, or cut some stuff out. "Chemical Burn" is a really cool song, but the song just feels like it's longer than it needs to be. I don't want to sound like I'm digging on ya, cause you've got some really cool stuff going on...but yeah.

[Bob Clayton]

Jake- i know what you mean about dragging on.

Chemical Burn & Dirty Secrets do drag on because they are our two longest songs (at over 5 min each), also the new bassline to Chemical Burn isn't recorded, but that doesn't matter as much since we don't play that song live.

I have more songs than that on my computer, if you're interested hit me up on PM or AIM and we'll work something out.

[beyondhairy]

dirty secrets starts off and reminds me of a NIN song, i forgot wich one but i think its the becoming


new friend request btw

[Bob Clayton]

added

[sevenkill24]

I dig your sound. I just moved up this way from d.c., living over in pa. checkout my last project at www.myspace.com/thekilldefect

[CHILDISHGAMBINO]

I like it. If you had cds I would buy one and I'm a cheap mofo.

[Bob Clayton]

Originally Posted by CHILDISHGAMBINO

I like it. If you had cds I would buy one and I'm a cheap mofo.

we're recording an ep in feb.

i'll send you a free copy.

[Blues Cat]

The satan shirts are a deal killer for most of us.

[ALiP BoB]

The strumming part is kinda unexpected. Kinda spoiled the mood of the song.

[Bob Clayton]

Originally Posted by Blues Cat

The satan shirts are a deal killer for most of us.

they aren't "satan shirts". the name of the band is "One-Liner". the cirlce is actually an "O". there are also two "L"s, to keep it symetrical. the star is just to add filler and looks better upside-down.

Originally Posted by ALiP BoB

The strumming part is kinda unexpected. Kinda spoiled the mood of the song.

a lot of our songs have weird stumming patterns, kind of our thing.

[beyondhairy]

i like the strumming part.. it fits very well..

its a realy killer song, i sent a friend request