Your timing is a little behind the beat. I think with a little more practice you'll clean it up nicely. And I like that heavy tone. You will want to check your spelling on the title, though. "Beautiful" is spelled wrong in both the video title and tags. And putting the artist name in your tags will help people with searches.
As for the video being dark, it's probably because of how youtube compresses the video. It's always good to be very well lit on any video. The more light the better. You do run a risk of the video looking too white, but I would rather see things be over bright than dark and muddy.
you know why your always in the dark on your videos?
naww....I better not answer that here.
just play behind the lights mike, not in front of them...the camcorder will like that better and if you really want to be mysterious for real, just wear a hood and your mask, like that cool "bandit" picture of you and your blUeBird.
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