I am guessing you want info on your tapping, but your taping could be a little more clear.
As far as the tapping, do you use something to mute the strings at the nut like a hair tie or something? It sounds like you are getting noise from the nut side. It also sounds like you could use a metronome.
Other than, pretty solid playing, the solo was well thought out as well in my opinion.
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