Improvement advice

[No_Fingures]

Hey my band recorded a little but back...and i was wondering if ya guys and gals could give me some constructive critisism on my playing..... or on the songs structure... Arcade of Sophistry is the only one i wrote out of the 3.
well thanks
here ya go
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[Adam Barkley]

Those are different. What do you call that?

One thing I am noticing listening to the first song, the slap section in the chorus harmony is really, really annoying; like it doesn't flow with the song. It seems like you slapped just because you could instead because it fit the song.

Second Song- All I can say is no more coffee for the guitar player.

Third Song - Liked this one alot until the weird chorus or whatever

One thing I have noticed in all the clips is you have a very good tone, tons of bottom with no boom. Also the sound on the clips is very good, did you do this in a home studio. Good playing, not music that I would listen to regularly but seems very original.

Punk/Funk/Metal/Thrash/whatever.

[No_Fingures]

We did this at a studio of a friend of a friend of the guitarist. Thanks for the pionters... first kinda start out with the slap line mostly why its their.... i will re think that one though...

Thanks