The Awakennig Solo

[Kickemout]

Hi I'm having some problems with this solo - well just the end of it. I had my teacher work out most of it for me and worked out some of it my self.

Any way heres what i got
http://www.geocities.com/mikesfunkyb..._Awakening.txt

This is based on the rhinopasty tommy the cat version of the solo.

I'm just wondering if any one can help me out with these end bits or see if any this there is seriously wrong.