need help- Transcribing Ella Fitzgerald's version of Desafinado

[Muss]

hey guys, first of, I'm not sure if this is the right forum, so feel free to move the message wherever.

anyhow, I'm transcribing Ella Fitzgerald's version of Desafinado: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9V0k0MOWt6g

and I just wanted to check if what I did is right, if not please tell me what's wrong.
(I'm not sure if I transcribed the music RHYTHMICLY right, so please pay attention only to that..)

here's what I did:


thanks,
Muss

[onlyclave]

It's a 3-2 clave pattern. I've written it with a different note length than you were using for clarity.