Please critique my tapping piece

[muthagoose]

I'm currently trying to write some solo pieces and I uploaded part of a piece I'm working on to youtube. I'd really like some honest opinions on my technique and writing so feel free to give me some constructive criticism!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SXFhPxenWTg

[Oric]

I thought it was really pretty. It'll sound even better when you get a proper bass amp going! It seemed to end kind of unresolved, however.
Some effects would make it cool too, but I don't know if you're an effect kind of person.

But yea, nice bass, and good technique.

[onlyclave]

Be careful that you don't rush your 16th notes.

[Darkstrike]

Nice style dude.

[soong]

Nice and melodica. Perhaps sustain some of the lower root notes? let em ring out to sound nice and bassline-y, if you know what i mean.