Not bad, but you need to have a metronome or a drum machine to play over. Your time sounds to me like it's all over the place, especially on the first one. Remember, playing with a good groove is Job 1 for us bass players. Try this - record yourself playing a 12-bar blues with a metronome set at 100 bpm. You can get a bit fancy if you want, but keep the groove going, and try to hit the root on the "one" of a measure. Then post it and let's see what it sounds like. 
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