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Old 11-23-2008, 09:50 PM
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attempt at writing a song

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just got lyrics for it and yes it is copyrighted so guys don't even think about it even if it sucks

anyways gimme some advice or whatever here it is

we are losing
losing all the we call hope
nothing left...to be shown
we fought back
but they were the victor
without out land we grow ever sicker
what we need
is a way to win
change for a our lives
our courage, our friends
we gotta change before this all ends

...rise from our ashes
break from the flames
bring back the life
bring back the courage
let us show who we are
its just a dream but it isnt to far

can we fix it
cause its starting to break
this pain...its to real to be fake
but we charge on
to fix our problems
but we charge on to rewrite our story

rise from our ashes
break from the flames
bring back the life
bring back the courage
let us show who we are
its just a dream but it isnt to far

no one realizes the fight we face
no one see the broken desire
they dont see what we go through
they dont know we cant go on
we can start now and hope for the best
we may fix it and give another day

get them to see
the unbound struggle
get them to see
with a whole new light
we arnt dying for nothing
we arnt living for anything
we fight this war...that we cant win
the is no way to end this sin...
do they care?

do they care
that we are wasting away
do they care?
that there will be no more
do they care?
that we have nothing
do they care?
do they really care?

we are desperate for all us all
cause if were not we amy fall
there is no one (echo) there is no one
we die for anyone
what will this become (echo) become
how will this end? (echo) how will this end?
we cant keep losing this battle (echo) battle, battle
cant break our fight (echo) can break this fight
what will this become?

(whispers) we try, try to go on, we try, to end it now, we try, but we fall back, we try, but we cant make it

we fight... and this war still rages on
we fight....but it never stops
we fight....and lose more than win
we fight....again and again

do they care?
oh do they care?
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