I'm listening to it now, and I like the feel of it (Better by half)
But I don't like the mix and sound of the bass.The technique and bassline sound good, but during the intro you're too loud and when the vocals kick in, your just a little too quiet. And something about your overall tone doesn't seem right.
I just read that wasn't you playing, so this is all stuff I'm sure you can do better
Keep up the good work.