Spooky-ish Bass Line?

[djbehar]

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What do you guys think of this bass line that I wrote for the "A" section of this song? I was trying to emphasize the two sus-chords, so I made the preceding bass notes chromatically lean into them


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I'd love feedback about the bass or the entire song

note: The guitar "solo" is not my best. I apologize for that ahead of time. This is just the first recording.

[kiwifrogpossum]

I like it

[Duckwater]

I dig it, good work.

[djbehar]

thanks guys