Thoughts and critiques please....

Joe Nerve · #1 01-24-2010, 10:06 AM

Since there was such an overwhelming response to the original post (3 in 24 hrs.) I feel I must add... there are some super hot half nekkid chicks in this video.

I have a somewhat cool promotional opportunity and needed to get a video done FAST. What's below is a no budget video slopped together in 2 days.

Song is only a minute and a half.

All thoughts and criticisms are wanted as I'd like people's opinions on whether I should let this fly or not as is, or take it back to the chopping block. Could lose the opportunity if I wait on it though.

Thanks in advance.

http://www.youtube.com/joenerve#p/u/0/7ZvzLdxlInM

Joe Nerve · #2 01-24-2010, 02:45 PM

5 hrs seems like a fair amount of time to bump this. Anyone?

tonyciv · #3 01-24-2010, 07:21 PM

This song rocks and your bass is Smoking!

KeithPas · #4 01-24-2010, 07:34 PM

Great tune, great presentation and great bass playing!!! Really well done.

Jim Campbell · #5 01-24-2010, 08:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Joe Nerve

I have a somewhat cool promotional opportunity and needed to get a video done FAST. What's below is a no budget video slopped together in 2 days.

Song is only a minute and a half.

All thoughts and criticisms are wanted as I'd like people's opinions on whether I should let this fly or not as is, or take it back to the chopping block. Could lose the opportunity if I wait on it though.

Thanks in advance.

http://www.youtube.com/joenerve#p/u/0/7ZvzLdxlInM

i like it....love the bass line....if it was me i'd take an abrupt turn in there and go off on some savage tangent,ala belew or crimson but ymmv

Joe Nerve · #6 01-25-2010, 04:41 AM

Thanks guys. One last bump.

PS. How does one get people to watch a video here? Do I have to let you know that there are some super hot nekkid chicks in it? OK. There are super hot nekkid chicks in the video.

foq1978 · #7 01-25-2010, 05:37 AM

Hello Joe,
Posting your video on "Recordings" instead of "Miscelaneous" will get more viewers.

You play very well, and that's a great bassline! Really good recording all around.

What's your bass? I think I never saw one of these...

Take care!

Jim Campbell · #8 01-25-2010, 07:54 AM

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Originally Posted by Joe Nerve

Thanks guys. One last bump.

PS. How does one get people to watch a video here? Do I have to let you know that there are some super hot nekkid chicks in it? OK. There are super hot nekkid chicks in the video.

yes,you do

P. Aaron · #9 01-25-2010, 03:03 PM

I like the song over all. I would've blasted the chorus out one more time at the very end...just to keep the hook in.

Nice stuff...great playing and visually interesting.

Dave Siff · #10 01-25-2010, 03:23 PM

The video was fun. Cool tune and great bass playing. I watched it twice.

Zombbg4 · #11 01-25-2010, 08:53 PM

Whoa...was I just taken back to the 90's?? lol Great playing man.

jollygiantchris · #12 01-26-2010, 01:01 AM

Cool looking bass man.

M.Wrenn · #13 01-26-2010, 01:17 AM

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Originally Posted by KeithPas

Great tune, great presentation and great bass playing!!! Really well done.

MASSSIVE +1!!!! great stuff joe

Joe Nerve · #14 01-26-2010, 06:13 AM

Thanks again ya'all! Thanks especially to foq1978. This got a whole lot more attention in 'recordings'. I think the neddid chicks helped a lot too though.