| These types of threads are more suited for the Recordings forum.
My Critiques:
The drums don't feel very solid. It is especially obvious on the botched snare roll. I also think the vocals could use some more work.
Musically, I'd rather listen to your influences than your band. Also, I think the structure of the song could use a little work. Basically it sounds like a couple of very long verses, which would be fine if the length added to the tension, but honestly it doesn't. There is no building tension and no release to speak of, so the long verses just seem like an attempt to make the song longer. Maybe a bridge or a breakdown could add interest to the song.
Peace,
Adam | 
