a work in progress.

[jonathan_matos5]

tell me what you think.

http://www.mediafire.com/?txdfttig9he

[jonathan_matos5]

here it is with what i added today.

http://www.mediafire.com/?bxthjnxncja


i want some feedback.

[MonetBass]

Not sure what you're going for there. The melody is hard to discern, and it's kind of jumpy. A start-stop kind of thing, if you will. The harmonization is good. Just needs to have the melody be more prominent. My $0.02.

[jonathan_matos5]

im going for a choral type feel. but i can develop more of a melody.


perhaps i could put in a fugue section or something to break up the choral and modulate the key changes better.