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View Poll Results: Is This A Good Ad? | |
Yes
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No
|    | 2 | 9.52% | |
Carrots
|    | 4 | 19.05% | |
Bacon Man in a Bacon Flavores Snuggie
|    | 8 | 38.10% |
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01-20-2010, 05:17 PM
|  | I make metal look good. | | Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Baxley, GA | | | My CL Ad - Good Or Bad?
Sign in to disble this ad
I'm setting up my chances in advance. Any criticisms about the ad I've posted? http://gainesville.craigslist.org/muc/1562604554.html
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01-20-2010, 05:18 PM
|  | Registered User | | Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: West Covina (LA), SoCal | | | I would maybe make it shorter. Sum up everything you want to say a little quicker.
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01-20-2010, 05:24 PM
| | Registered User | | Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Queens, NY | | | I like it. Well though out. |
01-20-2010, 05:36 PM
| | | Looks good to me.  |
01-20-2010, 08:26 PM
| | Registered User | | Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Richmond, Virginia | | | I would've checked "yes" on the poll, but "Bacon man in a bacon snuggie" was too good to resist |
01-20-2010, 08:29 PM
| | Banned | | Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Baton Rouge | | | remove pictures, mainly the bass shirt one and the cartoon. |
01-20-2010, 08:30 PM
| | Banned | | Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Baton Rouge | | | also, dont go on about your basses, just say you have the equipment and knowledge to get any tone. |
01-20-2010, 08:35 PM
| | Registered User | | Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: St. John's, NL | | | There was no suspense, I'm disappointed.
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01-20-2010, 09:28 PM
| | Registered User | | Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Framingham, Massachusetts | | Quote:
Originally Posted by MatticusMania I would maybe make it shorter. Sum up everything you want to say a little quicker. | true stuff. i didn't even read the whole thing and i've literally go nothing better to do.
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01-21-2010, 04:20 AM
| | Registered User | | Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: QLD, Australia | | | I have yet to read the CL ad, however I had to vote for 'Bacon Man in a Bacon Flavores Snuggie'
Why do you tempt me so!
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01-21-2010, 05:26 AM
| | Registered User | | Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Atlanta | | what? no cracks about underage drinkers or "Not looking to team up with twenty something’s who think they are going to take the world by storm with their lame, copy-cat, mee-too, sounds-like , super original undercover-cover band but hey, we’re much uglier and we suck out loud types."? 
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01-21-2010, 06:06 AM
| | | Did you ADD Bacon Man? I swear it wasn't a choice when I voted. I want a RE-VOTE!!!  |
01-21-2010, 06:42 AM
|  | Registered User | | Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: boston, ma | | Quote:
Originally Posted by Let It Fall remove pictures, mainly the bass shirt one and the cartoon. | This. Also agree with his post about the equipment, it would be sufficient to say you have quality gear. | | Thread Tools | Search this Thread | | | | 
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