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06-24-2009, 05:47 PM
|  | Registered User | | Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Central Alabama | | | My summer haiku
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Summer at the truck plaza
The chorus of 100 diesels
Urine on hot pavement
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06-24-2009, 06:16 PM
|  | that video LIES | | Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Northern California | | 7/9/7? I thought it was 5/7/5- like this:
Kids in yellow pool
I am NOT getting in there
The water's warm, though
(in keeping w/the urine connotation) 
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06-24-2009, 06:18 PM
| | Registered User | | Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Central Alabama | | | I'm freestylin' |
06-24-2009, 06:20 PM
| | Registered User | | Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Texas | | | June in Texas...
an armadillo
on fire
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06-24-2009, 06:21 PM
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Originally Posted by bassteban 7/9/7? I thought it was 5/7/5- like this:
Kids in yellow pool
I am NOT getting in there
The water's warm, though
(in keeping w/the urine connotation) | Haiku in English
Show, don't tell.
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06-24-2009, 06:22 PM
| | Registered User | | Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: (M)a$$hole. | | | failing and failing,
seems so simple to Haiku...
yet Stinsok can't hang.
I'm kidding of course,
Not that it really matters
just a silly rhyme.
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06-24-2009, 06:27 PM
| | Registered User | | Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Central Alabama | | | I thought mine fit within the Wiki guidelines! |
06-24-2009, 06:29 PM
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Originally Posted by Stinsok I thought mine fit within the Wiki guidelines! | Oh, it does. I quite like it. Maybe a little long.
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06-24-2009, 06:33 PM
| | that video LIES | | Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Northern California | | | Guidelines, schmidelines- HAH!
I spew tepid coffee- blech
upon silly rules
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06-24-2009, 06:34 PM
| | Registered User | | Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Central Alabama | | | Maybe more Prose(y) than Haiku? |
06-24-2009, 06:35 PM
| | that video LIES | | Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Northern California | | Quote:
Originally Posted by middy Oh, it does. I quite like it. Maybe a little long. | Maybe a little long? Hmmm...
Allow me to consider a response- here:
THAT IS WHAT YOU WISH SHE SAID
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06-24-2009, 06:37 PM
| | Registered User | | Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Central Alabama | | | High Five!!!!
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06-24-2009, 06:38 PM
| | Registered User | | Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Texas | | | The important thing is the juxtaposition of two complimentary images, usually in a seasonal context, in a short form that can be easily recited in a single breath.
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06-24-2009, 06:39 PM
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Originally Posted by bassteban Maybe a little long? Hmmm...
Allow me to consider a response- here:
THAT IS WHAT YOU WISH SHE SAID | It's all about the width, son. 
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06-24-2009, 06:39 PM
| | Registered User | | Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Central Alabama | | | So I'm good then? |
06-24-2009, 06:42 PM
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Originally Posted by Stinsok So I'm good then? | I don't know, how wide is it?
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06-24-2009, 07:18 PM
| | Registered User | | Join Date: May 2007 Location: Clarkston, MI | | | I like haikus
But I love Iron Maiden
Refrigerator
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06-24-2009, 08:15 PM
| | Registered User | | Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: tulsa oklahoma | | | summer time haiku
it is really hot outside
turns on the A/C
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06-25-2009, 07:47 AM
|  | <-- That guy looks like me, but old. | | Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: Arlington TX | | | a classic that used to be my sig:
Cats taste like chicken?
Mine just tastes like fur. Was I
supposed to peel them?
Or on topic:
Summer in Texas
I may just burst into flames
Holy Crap it's hot
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06-25-2009, 08:00 AM
| | Registered User | | Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Toronto, Ontario, Canada | | | Too hot to wear pants
My exposed legs are pasty
Now my junk can breathe
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