I saw this local band, The Bolts, for the first time last night. When they played their song "She Don't Know" I thought, "What a SICK bassline!" I went home and tried to figure it out.
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It's the second song on the music player, "She Don't Know." I've never tried to transcribe a bassline by ear before, so I don't really know the "right" way to do it.

This is what I was able to come up with. It sounds kinda right when I play it on its own, but when I try to play it along with the song it just sounds weird. Can anyone tell me if this tab is right or wrong, and how to fix it if it's wrong? Thank you!
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