| good transcription but I spotted a couple of things
the song is in A minor with a move to relative major C in the chorusy bit... the F#'s really only in there as one of those passing type chords... so drop the F# in the key signature and notate any F#'s with accidentals
the last note of the 1st bar of the main 2 bar phrase should be D not E, and the last note of the 2nd bar of that phrase should be an open A, not D
on the 2/4 bars, the last eighth note is a G#, and it's not stacatto
when you have big whole notes taking up a full bar like the one halfway down the first page, it's often easier to read if you make the bar roughly as big as your other bars... just so the eye scans the page evenly
bar 33 is a bit busier on the recording than your transcription, and there's a little octavey widdle at bar 34
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Last edited by cowsgomoo : 10-27-2006 at 08:51 AM.
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