| It's not too bad, but perhaps try a couple things-
1- Find a more realistic helmet... maybe something more line-art than a full-color drawing. Put it behind the words... kinda big, but subtle, and maybe at an angle.
2- try seperating the word "the" a little more. Maybe increase the spacing between the words, or take the size down slightly, or make it thinner, or the other words bolder.
I know, I'm picky, but I used to do this for my own band, and I'm a perfectionist! lol Good luck!
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