| Cool song. Another guitar track in the studio might serve it well by thickening it up. Or it may kill the groove. I'd record it. However, as a listener, I find myself expecting the main verse to build up into a stronger chorus and it's killing me. I am a rock fan, maybe you guys are going for more of a Maroon 5 type thing, but otherwise I'd work in a little harder hitting chorus to deliver a hook and add some dynamic flow.
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