Thanks for the comments, even good ones.
For the intonation, I sometimes doubt I even had one!
This is transcription by Croatian bassist
Josip Novosel, from 1976. He has transcribed all 6 suites, and my teacher said that it's easiest that she's seen.
And yes, it's transposed perfect quint down, so if you read it in tenor clef, you are in tune.
