1st Song Done Of An EP

I play bass and I sing. I started writing in the last year. I was playing bass for an outlaw country type band for a bit. That dried up with the pandemic, so I started putting energy into writing and singing. This is lofi or something like that. No real drums. Just me and my friend who plays guitar on the track. I wasn't aiming for perfection with this.

 

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If you do check it out I'd appreciate if you gave me some opinions.

 

I think I'm hoping to record this group of songs in the not to distant future. I guess if I end up forming a band and having decent gigging. Thanks for the kind words about liking it. This song was my first effort at classic(in my mind)style writing. I hope the other songs I wrote grew a bit after I wrote the 1st. If that makes sense. I'm happy with the song but I hope I have better in me as I keep gaining experience.

The guy losing his mind at :19 was great. Him and poofy haired guy seem like a good bunch.

 

Thanks a lot. I'm having the biggest learning curve with my voice. I think I'll be more comfortable in a year or two hopefully.

I think I should probably have an EP cover as the backdrop for the rest of the songs. I already have another video lined upnfor a song called Living The Dream but I might wanna do a backround for the rest of the stuff I put on YouTube. thanks for the feedback on the song.

 

I appreciate you guys taking the time and giving me feedback. It's important to be introspective imo.

 

Final bump in hopes for more feedback.

I do think I'm gonna cut down on the last set of 'why's' during the last chorus. Use a variation there to keep that chorus a bit more catchy hopefully.

 

Also, I'm hoping I find where my voice naturally sounds more quality with work. I kinda feel like the bridge is a more comfortable place for my voice to work from. I also think the lower notes on the verse are better than the higher ones.