Analyse Me

Hey guys i have just posted a video of myself playing 'Teen Town' (a bit out of my league but oh well ) Id like to use this video to help me with my techinique as i know i play the bass a bit differently than the usual way one way being i dont rest my arm and the other being i dont let my finger follow through to the next string, ive been playing for about a year and a half now so please be nice constructive criticism would be nice. thanks