I've recently been inspired to write original music after loosing a third band with nothing left but memories and debt. I'd like to get any feedback I can on the first nearly finished set of lyrics I've put together: Surrender You dont have my back so much for friends You forgot how to live You've been dead since you did surrender I know youre blind but I'm not deaf Hitting the right notes is the first ****ing step Surrender I give up no surrender I give up no surrender I give up Your friendship was plain You make me sick Compare me to him? Grow up its pathetic You think you're tough? We were supposed to be brothers Have respect for my choices Have fun playing covers you surrendered to the drugs that make you sick you surrendered you think it makes you different It's sung in my head like Kieth Morris of Black Flag / OFF. Thanks!