so on the train ride home from school today this little thing popped into my head. when i got home i promptly figured it out on my ancient, out-of-tune-by-more-than-a-half-step upright piano and made a recording. my jazz band teacher said today that if anyone in the ensemble was working on their own stuff, he would like to hear it. obviously i can't come in with just this melody (in F major, on one of the most standard possible chord progressions, with no bridge as of now), but i want feedback on it to see if it's even worth pursuing. i'm very uncomfortable at piano so this recording is about 40-50 bpm slower than i want it at in real life. http://media.putfile.com/head-to-new-tune i thought beginning with (or even soloing on!) a vamp of Fmaj7 and Faug would be kind of cool, but i didn't record that part. also if it sounds very, very similar to any other songs you know, point it out. i don't want to be thought of as a plagiarist.