Found song lyrics that just might indicate the writer's state of mind:

Eminem in the making.

 

Went from a ballad to a gangsta -rap classic........

 

So hard to write a good love song. Seems like this guy is holding back from telling us how he really feels.

 

Hey! I wrote a song just like that once.

 

lmao

 

I can definitely see the change in tone from the first to the second.

 

I think he's written the first verse and then proof-read it, the recap incensing him into the ensuing chorus. Having then got the bit firmly between his teeth he's then continued to the end in the same vein. Either way, a classic. Perhaps someone with a little time/GarageBand could realize his ambitious work by putting some music behind it?

 

Don't all song lyrics convey the writers state of mind???

 

First song was written while they still dated, and second after they married

 

Now I need to refill my glass (and clean my screen!)

 

Best lyrics ever, I nearly choked on my breakfast.

 

I'm imagining a song starting off with the first set of lyrics and then picking up intensity with the second. Something like Puddle of Mudd - She Hates Me.

 

Too bad he didn't write the one when he had just met her and it was all sunshine and roses. That would make a great trilogy.

1. Girl I know I love You
2. Girl I think I' losing you
3. Girl Go Die You Bitch

 

Still laughing

 

Reminds me of this:

 

At least he scratched out one of the "and die" lyrics from the second one. I guess he wasn't angry enough to leave that one in.