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Here's a few songs

Discussion in 'Miscellaneous [BG]' started by Microbass, Oct 10, 2002.


  1. I just broke up with my g/f good for something, ehuh?

    "Can't Take Anymore"

    So what now?
    Can u answer my question?
    Are we finished?

    Don’t think I love you any less…
    But is being by yourself better than you remembered it?

    Maybe I should just leave you to it?
    What’s so big about this anyway?
    There’s nothing wrong any more?

    Or is it just I…?

    Should I give up?
    We’re loosing what we already had
    You can’t even touch me
    Or look into my eyes.
    What’s the problem, my dear?

    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

    You’ll come back!
    Or maybe not,
    There’s not much I can do, best to let it go???



    Nothing.


    -------------------------------

    "What I Want"

    Like standing at Heaven’s door
    You’ve sentenced me like St. Peter
    Only you sent me back.

    Sent me back here.
    Sentenced me with broken tears.

    Pure love or hate?
    That doesn’t matter a more

    Peak point of the cliff
    I can jump now
    Or is there more to be said?

    Oh yes…

    Since they are so, go on and have them.
    But I know they can’t give you what you want.
    You won’t find me anywhere else.
    Not on this planet.
    But I won’t find you either.

    So what does this boil down to?
    Was everyday, one that was wasted?
    Nope. No wasted day,
    Could ever be for told with you…

    Time to stop with this.
    I’ll move on this time, and you’ll kill me if I stay or go.

    Tell me you love me now, I don’t want to leave…
    But what choice do I have?

    Gun me down, for I wish to leave.
    Forever.
    No back… No down.
    But I don’t want to runaway…
    So just think again,
    About what we may have had?

    I feel like the last drop of salted blood
    Dripping from my own brain…

    Paled faced, I’m dying out.
    This time I can’t give you what you want.
    This time I give myself
    This time…
    What I…
    Time… This… Now.
    I want…
     
  2. (crazy hardcore screaming)
    i want you back i want you back i want you back
    come back come back come back
    please please please please please please
    i love you i love you i love you
    I
    LOVE
    YOU

    gets them every time.
    im sorry I didnt know what you were looking for.
     
  3. i didnt ask for anything, i just felt liek sharing what I wrote..
     
  4. Dave Castelo

    Dave Castelo

    Apr 19, 2000
    Mexico

    LOL :D
     
  5. sorry then.
    I liked them.
    they should make a songwriting forum or something
     
  6. Gabu

    Gabu

    Jan 2, 2001
    Lake Elsinore, CA
    Cool man. Keep on rockin'! :)

    Baby... you broke my heart....
    Maybe ... you realise why I broke your face...
    Baby... You knew right from the start...
    Maybe... you should have sayed in your place...

    Oh, yeah... I love you so.
    Oh, yeah... I told you so.
    Oh, yeah... I love you, baby....
    Or else...

    Ah, sheesh. I can't go on... Someone help me finish this!!
     
  7. thanks.. past week has been a ruff one..

    i need to try & finish them.
     
  8. Gabu

    Gabu

    Jan 2, 2001
    Lake Elsinore, CA
    You are welcome! I hope things get better. :) When you finish up these tunes, post em up for us to listen to!
     

  9. ...I'll try something new now.
    What I'll do? I don't know.
    Someone show me the way,
    Lost in my own thoughts,
    I need to get away,
    Someplace, to rest.

    Oh baby-o, I can't go on
    Oh, won't you be mine?
    Oh, I need you now, baby,
    Yeah. I told you so. I love you-I-do.

    So, you're mine again!
    Together at last!
    Let's stay together, forever.

    I can't believe I thought this would work...

    Baby... you broke my heart....
    Maybe ... you realise why I broke your face...
    Baby... You knew right from the start...
    Maybe... you should have sayed in your place...

    Mind if I use those at some point Gabu? If I can come up with a melody, etc..?
     
  10. co-written by Gabu & Micro :D
     
  11. Gabu

    Gabu

    Jan 2, 2001
    Lake Elsinore, CA
    No problemo! Go for it!
     
  12. Thanks! :D
    Feel free to use mine if you wish in your own song ;)
     
  13. RedV

    RedV

    Mar 19, 2002
    Eustis, FL
    cigarettes and booze are just the,
    best that i can do to keep my,
    sense of timing(sense of timing)

    in ten minutes more,
    i'll be on the floor,
    left alone to die.


    Just thought I'd share to. I understand your situation...music is how I get by in life. If it wasn't for writing music I probably wouldn't be here right now.

    Keep at it guys.

    Peace.

    Alex
     
  14. Hey Red.. same here...
    I love these lyrics that I come out with, but my music sucks :(

    And I wanna come out with Blitzkrieg Bop songs...
    But I can't.. :(
    <-- punk rocker.. hehehe