ibanez five-strings

hey everyone!
im getting a new ibanez 5-string!
im saving for it, too young to get a job.
im selling lemonade on the corner
to raise money
only $279 more to go!


BTW i made up this bass riff, tell me how u like it

G ----------------------------------
D -----2----------------------------
A -----------3--3---2--0------------
E --0-0--0--------------------------

 

oops. i did it wrong last time.
here it is

G -----------------------------
A ------2----------------------
D ----------3-3-2-0------------
E --0-0---0---------3----------