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My first acid appearance...be nice!

Discussion in 'Recordings [BG]' started by spc, Nov 4, 2005.

  1. spc


    Apr 10, 2004
    South of Boston
  2. Adam Barkley

    Adam Barkley Mayday!

    Aug 26, 2003
    Jackson, MS
    Well I think both songs need to be fleshed out a little better.

    The spoken word sections (at each minute end of on the Paris song) are probably the things that I liked the most. Also, after the intro and before the outro of the Loop song, I was digging it.

    One major critique is long vibratos are overdone and actually took away from both songs.

    Keep in mind that it is rare that I find a bass oriented piece that I truly enjoy. So take my opinion with a grain of salt.

  3. spc


    Apr 10, 2004
    South of Boston
    Thanks abark, i appreciate it!
  4. chaosMK


    May 26, 2005
    Albuquerque, NM
    Hi-fi into an old tube amp
    Nice bass work. The synths/loops that are accompanying you could be a lot stronger & richer. The bass sounds great, but it contrasts a bit with the rest.
  5. spc


    Apr 10, 2004
    South of Boston
    Thanks for the feedback chaosMK!