My first song

Discussion in 'Miscellaneous [BG]' started by kirbywrx, Apr 7, 2002.

  1. kirbywrx

    kirbywrx formerly James Hetfield

    Jul 27, 2000
    Melbourne, Australia.
    I wrote my first song last night in bed. I wasnt tired, so i though "what the hell". Its about my girlfreind by the way. ;)

    V1)When I see her beautiful face
    With that baby smile and such cute grin
    I get a feeling from deep inside
    a feeling called love bursts out from within

    Ch)This is for the girl i love
    With a baby smile and face just as sweet
    As time ticks by, I cannot lie
    My love for her is oh so deep

    V2)Your teeny hands go right in my pocket
    Where we keep eachother warm and snug
    Your perfect body i cannot descrivbe
    I never want to end out hugs


    Br)With your eyes, ytou can light up my worst of days
    And you hands, well its an honour to hold them
    As for lips, when we kiss,
    Well thats a part ill always miss


    What do you all thinkk for a first song? Soppy? Good? Pathetic?
    Oh yeah, I DID base the chorus on the timing of Brainstew by Greenday :D