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My Girlfriend Wrote A Poem

Discussion in 'Miscellaneous [BG]' started by Matt Till, Sep 8, 2003.


  1. Matt Till

    Matt Till

    Jun 1, 2002
    Edinboro, PA
    Dance


    His hands are
    Strong and worn
    As his fingers
    Dance
    Upon the strings
    Of his fret board.

    The music wafts
    From the stage
    And all the people
    Dance
    Across the dance floor
    Of the bar.

    Together they dance
    To the beat
    That is produced
    By his fingers
    And the drums.

    More dancers join
    And some leave the floor
    But his fingers
    Still
    Dance.







    She says it's about me, but I feel it relates to all of us. ;)
     
  2. Danny R.

    Danny R. Supporting Member

    That's deep........ [​IMG]
     
  3. Wrong Robot

    Wrong Robot Guest

    Apr 8, 2002
    Holding your hand

    Holding your hand I feel something,
    a spark, a pulse, a trembling.

    So much energy is locked inside,
    so much that you cannot hide.

    In holding your hand I feel it all,
    I hear the response and the call.

    So this is your hand, it doesn't look so great,
    but what do I know I don't play bass.

    :p
     
  4. stuie86

    stuie86

    May 9, 2003
    mckinney, tx
    those where both great poems..... inspiring to, ill see if i can come up with something in the next few days:D
     
  5. Benjamin Strange

    Benjamin Strange Commercial User

    Dec 25, 2002
    New Orleans, LA
    Owner / Tech: Strange Guitarworks
    Bass Haiku:

    My amps are too loud
    If I play a note too low
    I will poop my pants
     
  6. stuie86

    stuie86

    May 9, 2003
    mckinney, tx
    interalive the beat

    interalive the beat,
    so when you get up to play,
    it can all just wash away,

    interalive the beat,
    so ever movement is like,
    a taping of your feet,

    interalive the beat,
    so every strum is like,
    a song birds hum,

    interalive the beat,
    so they can feel your soul,
    even when your mind loses control.
     
  7. stuie86

    stuie86

    May 9, 2003
    mckinney, tx
    ok so it didnt take a few days it toke 20 mins.... yay im happy, i havent written any thing in months

    yay, THANKS MATT!!!

    edit: oh and p.s. today marks my months of being here. that gets another yay!!