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my girlfriend wrote me a poem and its wicked

Discussion in 'Off Topic [BG]' started by Stanley Design, Oct 23, 2003.

  1. i read it and was all like "wow, i love you" its so awesome, so is she. heres the poem.....

    A kiss and a hug from me to you
    Whenever you’re feeling sad or blue
    And Whenever it’s dark and cold outside
    I hope to keep you warm, I am by your side

    How I love you’re smile

    Let me be your rose
    Throughout the entire garden of weeds
    Let me be the only Flower
    To grow in your garden of seeds

    I Swear I’ll always be truthful
    You’ve never given me reason to complain
    But remember if ever you make a mistake
    I will love you all the same

    Your Heartbeat’s as thin as a whisper
    But I Feel my own pound like a drum
    But a Drum and A Whisper are even
    To the sweet songs the humingbirds hum

    And I love you’re smile

    I Love You now, I love you always
    I Love You From Head to Toe
    Secrets extict, keep nothing from me
    Theres nothing about you I don’t want to know

    And I love you’re smile

    Let me be your rose
    I’d love to be your Rose
    You’re Only Rose
    Picked from the garden of weeds

    Let Me be the rose, the only rose
    the one you love to love
    and Let the drum keep beating
    Let the drum in my heart keep beating
    Let our hearts keep beating
    Whenever life goes from push to shove

    And I love you’re smile
    I Hope You Keep Smiling
    I love it when you smile
  2. Munjibunga

    Munjibunga Total Hyper-Elite Member Gold Supporting Member

    May 6, 2000
    San Diego (when not at Groom Lake)
    Independent Contractor to Bass San Diego
    hhhhheh heh heh hhhhhhhhhheh heh heh heh heh ... She said ............... "seeds."

    Actually, that's really cool. Are you going to write some music for it?
  3. Mike Money

    Mike Money Banned

    Mar 18, 2003
    Bakersfield California
    Avatar Speakers Endorsing Hooligan
    huh huh.... "garden"
  4. Victor Wooten98

    Victor Wooten98 Guest

    Jul 31, 2003
    South of Heaven...
    That title threw me off, I was expecting some messed up poem...

    But thats 'pretty' Not to bad, tell her to write it in latin, and recite it, I atuall love poetry (one of the very few guys that do, not to mention on of a handful that admit it) You should lay out the bed in Rose Pedals... Then you can have a fun night LOL.
  5. Joe Turski

    Joe Turski

    Jul 29, 2003
    How sweet, I woman who loves your toes! :D

    Very nice poem, give her a hug for me! ;)
  6. great idea
  7. He he she said "penis"

    (Or maybe I imagined it)

    Anywho very sweet girlfriend you have there. Take care of her.
  8. Eric Cioe

    Eric Cioe

    Jun 4, 2001
    Missoula, MT
    Good poem, really. But it's your. You're is you are. Your is possessive. ;)

    But seriously, I wish I had someone to write cool poetry for me. That would be awesome.
  9. wait, thats the poem she wrote for you? I got the same one from her 2 days ago....

    by the way, tell her i think i left one of my socks under her bed;)

    just kidding man, congrats on finding one who's relly into you:D
  10. Gia


    Feb 28, 2001
    oh my god :meh:
  11. i think he's from the UK, where wicked means cool.

  12. Where I'm from wicked also means cool....it's a wicked saying :cool:

    And when a girl writes you a poem thats actually pretty decent....grab her and don't let go. Congrats


    Jun 1, 2003
    Orlando, FL
    cmon guys, we need to help BA get in touch with her feminine side :p
  14. Gia


    Feb 28, 2001
    i'm in touch with my feminine side, just not with my crappy poetry side :meh:

    (no offence TS, i'm sure your girl's lovely, i just don't like her poem)


    Jun 1, 2003
    Orlando, FL
    todd's gf-0
  16. pfft broken angel is just jelous;) :p

    and im from Canada, where wicked means cool and hamburgers eat people, also, hot snow falls up.


    Jun 1, 2003
    Orlando, FL
  18. Victor Wooten98

    Victor Wooten98 Guest

    Jul 31, 2003
    South of Heaven...
    Its just me, Im only 18 but Im not in with the 'Popular' people, Im my own man...

    Thats like (Foshizzle my Nizzle, Bizzle) or some crap like that... Homie... (god I hate popular people)
  19. Wrong Robot

    Wrong Robot Guest

    Apr 8, 2002

    we hate you too :p
  20. cheezewiz

    cheezewiz Supporting Member

    Mar 27, 2002
    There once was a man from Nantucket...