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My new comic is in the works

Discussion in 'Off Topic [BG]' started by Blazer, Jan 4, 2004.


  1. Blazer

    Blazer

    Nov 27, 2003
    The Netherlands
    Rogue luthier employed at Knooren Handcrafted bass guitars
    After doing a couple of fanmade comics I decided to broaden my horizon and begin work on a comic that's 100% from my own hand and I've come up with a great concept and here's the first page.

    The story's called "Me and Her" and is about a guy named Jay Clifton who discovers that it's not always a blessing to get what you wished for.

    [​IMG]
     
  2. SeeSharp

    SeeSharp

    Sep 26, 2002
    Georgia
    Nice work dude, great art work.
     
  3. nonsqtr

    nonsqtr The emperor has no clothes!

    Aug 29, 2003
    Burbank CA USA
    Very nice work! You have a bright future ahead of you. When you get bored and have nothing else to do, you can consult in the graphic arts business for anywhere between 20 and 50 bucks an hour. Nice day job, to pay for all that bass gear!
     
  4. Matt Till

    Matt Till

    Jun 1, 2002
    Edinboro, PA
    Very anime, but I won't hold that against you. :D



    What happens next what happens next.:cool:
     
  5. Damn dude...thats good!


    I call dibs on first finished copy! :D
     
  6. Blazer

    Blazer

    Nov 27, 2003
    The Netherlands
    Rogue luthier employed at Knooren Handcrafted bass guitars
    Since I oike to work ahead, I already drew an action scene which I shall be using later on.
     
  7. Damn dude...thats so cool! :D
     
  8. Blazer

    Blazer

    Nov 27, 2003
    The Netherlands
    Rogue luthier employed at Knooren Handcrafted bass guitars
    Thanks and that Scar will be a very important addition to the plot.
     
  9. *takes notes* ;)
     
  10. Blazer

    Blazer

    Nov 27, 2003
    The Netherlands
    Rogue luthier employed at Knooren Handcrafted bass guitars
    Anyway, time to out the pages in the right order, I already posted the first page, here's the second.

    [​IMG]
     
  11. Blazer

    Blazer

    Nov 27, 2003
    The Netherlands
    Rogue luthier employed at Knooren Handcrafted bass guitars
    And page three
    [​IMG]
     
  12. The drawing looks great but I have something you may want to try to fix or a fix in comics to come...
     
  13. Dave Castelo

    Dave Castelo

    Apr 19, 2000
    Mexico
    angsty
     
  14. Nick man

    Nick man

    Apr 7, 2002
    Tampa Bay
    more?

    Peace
    Nick
     
  15. Blazer

    Blazer

    Nov 27, 2003
    The Netherlands
    Rogue luthier employed at Knooren Handcrafted bass guitars
    Here you go, it took me a while to finish because I was destracted by the music playing in the background.

    Note to self: don't put on Motley Crue while drawing because it'll only have me yearning to pick up a guitar and rocking out.

    "Honey, that's how ya makin' money, boys call ye hell on high heels..."


    [​IMG]
     
  16. Aaron

    Aaron

    Jun 2, 2001
    Bellingham, WA
    It could use an 80-year-old elvis, a black JFK, and an Ass-sucking mummy.
     
  17. ...and some weird alien anime creature.

    [​IMG]
     
  18. Blazer

    Blazer

    Nov 27, 2003
    The Netherlands
    Rogue luthier employed at Knooren Handcrafted bass guitars
    Sorry guys but my comic will not include your sick ideas. :rolleyes:

    for that I'd advice you to go to wwoec.com There you'll find LOADS of stories to sastisfy your sick thoughts.

    Seriously, I want constructive feedback, is that too much to ask you for?
     
  19. Bruce Lindfield

    Bruce Lindfield Unprofessional TalkBass Contributor Gold Supporting Member

    My feedback is that all the characters look like girls and there is little balance in this respect...:meh:

    I can see how this might be your "style", but I can see it as a limiting factor and may tend to produce one-dimensional stories with lttle variety.

    I'm a fan of Alan Moore's comics and their incredible level of detail - but he has had a richly varied mix of visual styles.
     
  20. I think it's great...I am a tough-ass when it comes to reading too!

    I can't wait until the other pages! keep it up dude! :)

    Sadly,I do agree with Mr.Quak his arm does look odd.

    G'luck