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My New Recording

Discussion in 'Recordings [BG]' started by Stephen S, Jun 2, 2004.

  1. Stephen S

    Stephen S Member

    Apr 10, 2002
    San Bernardino, CA
    Check out my new recording. It is one of my first songs where guitar uses real chords. I'm a beginning guitarist, so don't expect too much. I'm also sick so my voice sounds a little whinier than normal. How very emo of me. Check it out and share your opinion of it. I realize there are mistakes, I sang and played at the same time in my room. It is just a demo. Anyway www.clichepoet.vze.com "Riches To Rags"
  2. nice, but i would add the distortion, or at least make it a softer distortion, or something without so much treble, i would think it would bring out the vocals more, just my opinion though...

  3. Stephen S

    Stephen S Member

    Apr 10, 2002
    San Bernardino, CA
    Anyone else?
  4. Whafrodamus


    Oct 29, 2003
    Andover, MA
    The guitar is out of tune >_<. Plus, I'm not a big fan of punk/pop.. And you're a tad off key in some places, but hey.. No one's perfect.