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My new song...

Discussion in 'Miscellaneous [BG]' started by PeaveyTNT, Feb 13, 2003.


  1. PeaveyTNT

    PeaveyTNT Banned

    Jul 21, 2002
    USA
    It is called Parasite... It is about a girl who is emotionally attatched to her ex, and will not let go... And no, I have never heard the kiss song called "Parasite Lady" :p

    Probably needs some revision of course, so any good criticism is welcome :bassist:

    Parasite:
    V1:

    I tried so hard to make it work,
    Instead you call the cops and start to go berserk (Hey)

    I don't even remember why...
    Why I even tried...

    All it did was make us cry...
    Chorus:

    You still cling to me...
    I gave you your one last shot,
    You blew it now get lost.
    Please go away from me, my,
    My little parasite...

    V2:

    You try so hard to my my life miserable...
    Now you can't because I'm invincible! (hey)

    I don't even know why...
    Why you even try...

    It only makes you cry

    (to chorus)

    (Interlude?)

    You have gotten under my skin...
    The pain is just starting to begin...

    I have to get away...
    Things are far from OK...

    I cannot let you win...
    I gotta get you out and not let you back in...

    (to chorus)
     
  2. Benbass

    Benbass

    Jan 28, 2002
    Kansas
    Sounds familiar. Like a relationship I was in. Not bad.
     
  3. PeaveyTNT

    PeaveyTNT Banned

    Jul 21, 2002
    USA
    This song could apply to me and my ex...

    She broke up with me last Valentines day...

    But we just cannot stay away from eachother.

    When we are around eachother, we are usually cuddling or something...

    We just don't want to get back together...
     
  4. yes, very familiar....very familiar indeed...
     
  5. odie

    odie Supporting Member

    M-U-S-I-C related. Moving it to your neiborhood misc area.
     
  6. only im the parasite :(
     
  7. Stupidnick

    Stupidnick

    Mar 22, 2002
    ...my room...
    awesome song man..
    i know how it is.. my ex wont stop buggin me..

    She already broke my heart...what else does she want from me?
     
  8. ashleyholloway

    ashleyholloway Guest

    May 6, 2002
    Memphis, TN
    yeah im the parasite :)