My new video : "Eternal Waterfalls"

Discussion in 'Recordings [BG]' started by Steven Melensen, Aug 10, 2005.

  1. Steven Melensen

    Steven Melensen

    Aug 2, 2005
  2. i can't get the links to work. or find where to get the files.
  3. Adam Barkley

    Adam Barkley Mayday!

    Aug 26, 2003
    Jackson, MS
    I liked the intro (A) section.

    Didn't care for the rest of the music or your tone. Chops-fests have never been something I've enjoyed though.

    Also the different parts don't seem flow at all.

  4. Whafrodamus


    Oct 29, 2003
    Andover, MA
    You're timing is okay, but there wasn't a lot of dynamic variation until after that Norwegian wood thing (that was totally wooten-esque). I mean, it would go from superquiet and soft to quiet and sorta-soft. It started to pick up speed, then you went into the strum and slap thing.. but that kinda killed it :-\.

  5. I liked the tapping, but I didn't care for the strumming/slapping. It didn't flow too well, but I think if you just left it at the tapping and cut about half of the intro out, it'd be great as is.
  6. EricTheEZ1


    Nov 23, 2004
    Clawson, MI
    I've seen a couple of your vids now. You need to start thinking more melodically with an emphasis on moving smoothly from a theme to a solo.

    IMHO, you're trying to be too flashy. Make sure you're holding down a groove. Not just soloing.