I need to write a paragraph about myself to get into an advance placement english course next year. I manage to forget about it until tonight when it is due tomorrow. I know it really isn't a good paragraph and it would be a big help if some of you could help me catch the technical errors in it. I am not your typical teenager. Rather than listen to rap and rock Id rather being listening to smooth jazz or playing in my jazz band, Sax Appeal. I play multiple instruments in five different groups ranging from small jazz combos to large concert bands and marching percussion ensembles. My continuous practice is the only way I am able to remain active in these various groups. Instead of posters of famous people on my walls I have three pages of quotes ranging from music to life and atheism. I think that Anaïs Nin said it best when she said When we blindly adopt a religion, a political system, a literary dogma, we become automatons. We cease to grow. If you need to find me Im the guy who is tapping his foot to music older than my parents and ponder some question with no answer. Thanks in Advance.