Discussion in 'Recordings [BG]' started by deepbob, Mar 31, 2003.

  1. deepbob


    Oct 3, 2001
    left field
    as always, appreciate any feedback. a first run here.

    2 second bass solo ( :bassist: ) from 02.18 to 02.20, after the distortion section...

    >> why (mp3)

    there's so many voices in america
    and yet so few speaking
    so many choices in america
    and so few worth making

    why, do we have to fall apart?
    while everyone is getting high
    on shooting them guns and eating grandma's pie?

    check it out...

    America's still good
    just not doin what we should
    poking fights that we're picking
    the corporations are tricking

    all them and all of us
    and making a big fuss
    about making fools
    out of everyone of us

    i have to confess
    their sending our very best
    to save us from their mess
    without the love of the world

    rip our family apart
    only profitable hearts
    who see the cash stashed
    in rushing it and hash

    excluding any competition
    like that mr bill gates
    on an anti-trust mission
    lies the actual debate

    (singer's too busy playing to sound good)


  2. Johnalex


    Jul 20, 2001
    South Carolina
    There is a lot going on...it is intresting. Some of the vocals need to be brought out more. Kick drum sounds really good. Fretless correct. I think it sounds really good. That one part where the whole mix gets "flanged" it sounds kind of wierd like mad comb filtering... a little wieird on the ears but cool heh. I really like it. But it does sound like your low end needs to be turned up. At some parts I can hear it, and those parts sound great. IT seems like when I can't hear the real low end the song is missing its foundation. I really like it. Listening to it for the 2nd time now. It is really intresting, keep up the good work. :bassist:
  3. 5stringDNA


    Oct 10, 2002
    Englewood, CO
    :meh: Tried the link but only got an error page.
  4. Matt Till

    Matt Till

    Jun 1, 2002
    Edinboro, PA
    Very chaotic. Yeah the vocals need work. The general mix could be better too to sort out the chaos a bit more. But I dig, I dig.
  5. deepbob


    Oct 3, 2001
    left field
    great feedback, i agree with the commentary.

    still a work in progress, but we got new vocals and remixed a bit. hit reload, same file name.
  6. Johnalex


    Jul 20, 2001
    South Carolina
    GREAt improvement on the vocals!!!. The bass is coming thru a lot better now. DEfinant imporvement on the mix on this versionl. What is up with the chaotic parts, the volume seems to go up, maybe clipping...I really like the whole song except for those few parts. Maybe it is just from your mp3 encoder that is cousing the problem.

    I really like the song. It is very intresting and different, which is a good thing. New things are coool! Keep rocking man.:bassist: