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  1. Lone Tardigrade

    Criticize My Track

    Thanks again for another informative post/reply. I will be attempting to mix the track tomorrow with what I have and I'm planning to re-record the track again, as well as play around with some notes on the keyboard. I'm glad you're interested in listening to how the track will change (hopefully...
  2. Lone Tardigrade

    Criticize My Track

    Woah, thank you! It seems like this site will really help me. Off to read it.
  3. Lone Tardigrade

    Criticize My Track

    No worries, I got what you meant (in regards to the comment on how you listened to the track)! I guess I'll just have to put my insecurities aside and take all your positive feedback at face value :D That is totally what I did, I just went with the flow and enjoyed playing the little bass line...
  4. Lone Tardigrade

    Criticize My Track

    Any critizing that you think might help me improve will be GREATLY appreciated. I'm not one to be known as someones who takes harsh critizism well, but I need to take it and deal with it when it comes to this, music. So yeah, anything will be apreciated, even if it'll be feedback that's much...
  5. Lone Tardigrade

    Criticize My Track

    A DI box sounds like a nice thing to invest in. Thanks for the helpful suggestions!
  6. Lone Tardigrade

    Criticize My Track

    Although it sounds a bit complicated (I'm not very enlightened when it comes to the whole field of recording software/mixing etc, I will look into everything you suggested. (Late) Happy Easter back at ya :D
  7. Lone Tardigrade

    Criticize My Track

    Thanks for the lovely feedback. It's nice to see a "youngling" such as yourself be quiet aware of different kinds of methods to make music sound better. I will for sure look into
  8. Lone Tardigrade

    Criticize My Track

    I will get right on that and research your suggestion a bit more.
  9. Lone Tardigrade

    Criticize My Track

    No worries regarding the late reply! Thank you for a second opinion on improvisation. The same thing that happens to you (the whole chorus popping into your head) happens to me and I'm quite grateful for it because otherwise I wouldn't know where to start. You going into detail on how you...
  10. Lone Tardigrade

    Criticize My Track

    Thanks for the advice. I'm looking into better recording software. I guess I put a little too much distortion because without it, my bass has a nice deep tone. The reason I didn't share the whole track was because there was some talking in the background (it was the only time I was able to...
  11. Lone Tardigrade

    Criticize My Track

    Also, if I may ask just one more thing, how did you both listen to the tracks? In other words, how did you react as you were listening? I want to know if it made you, even slightly, tap your fingers or bop your head? Or did you just listen without really noticing anything? Odd question, I know...
  12. Lone Tardigrade

    Criticize My Track

    Hey man, excuse my late reply. Thanks for some more awesome tips, any and all advice is obviously so appreciated, as is encouragement to keep playing as well as positive comments on the bassline on this track, which I never really considered to be even slightly above average. I forgot to...
  13. Lone Tardigrade

    Criticize My Track

    Ah, I got it now. I'll look into recording my bass without a microphone. Thanks again and good day/night to you, sir.
  14. Lone Tardigrade

    Criticize My Track

    That pesky little beeping sound is my fire alarm and it's low batteries :laugh: I actually remembered that I recorded this particular track with my Neewer NW-800 microphone, not the Microphone Array that comes built into my Microsoft Surface Pro 3, so that's why you seem to think the audio is...
  15. Lone Tardigrade

    Criticize My Track

    Anything now? Thanks for making me aware of this minor issue, by the way.