Recent content by Melting

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    Just a few of my home-made songs. Opinions/Criticism greatly appreciated

    Me? On vocals? I think "throw up" is more appropriate... I listened, and I think it's interesting, I like that you didn't only stay within the realm of doom. You could take some rhythmic cues from Dark Castle to avoid the KH-H-H-H-SH-H-H-H or drum patterns in your stoner/doom section though. I...
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    Just a few of my home-made songs. Opinions/Criticism greatly appreciated

    Ozzy-esque: the riff at 0:38 would be better off without its second half; it's a little too easy-going, especially compared to the eerier part of the song afterwards. This song drags out a bit but maybe it's because there are no vocals (do you want to add guest vocals or are you just doing...
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    Can't finish my instrumentals!

    I don't mean to write anything progressive or drawn-out, just to make music I like. It's maybe reminiscent of prog rock, but not aspirational. Anyway, thanks for the ideas. I guess I'll keep trying, but I can rarely go over 2:00, unless I have a very long progression to begin with (third SC...
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    Can't finish my instrumentals!

    [Edit] Fixed widgets. Hello! I'll just quickly introduce myself now, as this is my first post. I'm a sixteen year-old BG player and pretentious music nerd from Canada; I play in what you could call an experimental or progressive (I don't like the term) rock band. I've been composing everything...