structure

Hello I have experienced tuning instability with my bass particularly when changing places (my house vs symphony Hall etc.) Part of this is of course difference in humidity and temperature from air conditioning in the symphony Hall vs my house. Now my bass is about 90 years old so that might be...

Howdy, [TLDR at bottom] I was hoping for some feedback on the structure of this song I've written. I've always been into songs which throw traditional song structure out the window and break up your expectations. I don't intentionally try to write songs like that, but they do turn out that way...