Calling all people with ears, help me out here.

[Adelleda]

I think this tab is pretty close to perfection, but please tell me which one sounds right, and do any corrections, this is my first tab by the way, been play for over two years though.
Fugazi - Break Bass starts at about 0:29
Version 1

G|-----------12--------------------11---12-----------------------------------------------|
D|------10--------12----------12---------------------------------------9-----------------|
A|-12--------------------12------------------0----10-10-10---0---0---------10------------|
E|---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------|

Version 2

G|-----------12--------------------11---12-----------------------------------------------|
D|------10--------12----------12---------------------------------------9-----------------|
A|-0---------------------0-------------------0----10-10-10---0---0---------10------------|
E|---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------|