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Haiku thread

for the rush fans here
a reinterpretation
offered here, humbly...

(to the music of hemispheres, rearranged for koto, shakuhachi, and
shanai)

<gong>

I. prelude

when the world was young
the ancient's struggle was new
the gods were quite pissed

Love and Reason fought
to rule the fate of mankind
man got bent for gods

<gong>

II. apollo

apollo did speak
"i bring truth, understanding
wit and wisdom fair"

"precious gifts i give
build a wondrous world we will
awareness is yours"

"room and board i give
Hold Your Fire to keep warm (sorry)
stay out of the cold"

"luxury and grace
my gifts to my wee brethren
turn the world around"

folks were delighted
they built many cool places
talked deep about things

not all was good though
although they were unaware
i think they were bored

wise men offered thoughts
"Quest to cross the Bridge of Death
Find Dionysus"

<gong>

iii. dionysus

dionysus speaks
"i bring love to give solace
get laid more with me"

"feel the heart's glow
only trust your feelings now
Love can steer you right"

"i bring laughter too
listen to the killer Tunes
Joy and Tears are yours"

"soothe your primal fears
Throw off those chains of reason
your prison is gone"

the cities were left
the forests echoed parties
danced and lived as kin

food and wine abounds
party til they passed out cold
gods watched quietly

winter came - Bummer
they were not prepared to freeze
wolves and hunger came


<gong>

iv. armageddon

universe in half
heart and mind collided hard
folks left unguided

clouds of doubts and fears
our world was torn asunder
hollow hemispheres

fighting abounded
lost and aimless like their kin
men just wandered blind

noncombatants spoke
tales of old brought to light
Rocinante flew

heart of cygnus force
our course went through timeless space
right here to this place

<gong>

v.cygnus

"i have memory
no shape or form have i now
i am aware too"

"i am not alive
i am a floating spirit
i am not yet born"

"i'm in olympus
as the old tales did tell
city of the gods"

"they are fighting hard
the sky lit with lightening
i feel a scream"

chaos ceased at once
everything was peaceful now
all were mystified

the gods were surprised
apollo, dionysus
they listened to me

look from olympus
on a world in a sad state
sorry hemispheres

sat some in silence
turning to me at long last
"you are cygnus now"

"cygnus of balance
you will keep us from being lame
acting like wee lads"

<gong>

vi. the sphere

hang out together
if our goals are all the same
or alone and free

truth of love be lit
love of truth will shine clearly
sensibility

sense and liberty
unite the heart and the mind
single perfect sphere

I wonder how long
Before somebody complains
"Too long; didn't read"?