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How does this sound....

Hey I've been playing bass for about 2 years now, and I stopped for a bit and picked it up again, and I thought of this riff which I think works pretty well, how about you guys? If have any suggestions to improve on it, please do!

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I've also been thinking of tying this in with it, but I'm not sure how

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| 0----3(slide to 7----(slide to 3----0------0
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Not sure how RIGHT the tabs are, just now that it's played on the first string when holding it correctly, the thickest one. And I'm not sure if the tempo is right wither, or how to set up the tempo, it's just something like that.
 
E 000000003333333377777777/5/3/22----------------------
A -----------------------------------0300300305/3/5(((/33
G --------------------------------------------------------
D --------------------------------------------------------

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Try playing your idea bass line and this one at about 140 BPM