The wiring looks ok to me. The bare wire should go to the same jack terminal, (sleeve) as the black. It must be or it wouldn't be working at all, ha ha. I think it must be a problem with your pots. If you have a tester, you can clip one probe to the centre of each pot (one at a time) and the high side (where the white wire is soldered) and see if there are big drops in resistance, rather than a smooth transition as you turn the pot from one stop to the other. For the tone pot use the centre and terminal the capacitor is soldered to. Then you will know for sure. I'm not very experienced at this and I my not have the terminology right, but think I have the right idea here. I wonder, what is the purpose the small capacitor between the two terminals on the volume pots?